id	summary	reporter	owner	description	type	status	priority	milestone	component	version	resolution	keywords	cc
1162	XML Report Bugs	William Harrington	clfs-commits@…	"Michio Matsuyama reported bugs at the '''CLFS-Dev''' mailing list regarding our XML.

>Hi,
>
>I report the miscoding or typo bugs, maybe, on the XML sources of
>CLFS book as follows:
>
>Bug #1:
>  Sortas values should not be like ""a-..."",  but like ""b-..."".
>
>  final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml
>  final-system/sparc/silo.xml
>
>Bug #2:
>  Misplace the title: ""The meaning of the new configure option:"".
>
>  final-system/common/shadow.xml
>  final-system/multilib/shadow.xml
>
>Bug #3: (only for 'sysvinit')
>  Group for D-bus, not User.
>
>Bug #4: (only for 'systemd')
>  Wrong xref linkend for man-pages in the Attr package section.

{{{
#1: final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml new/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml
--- orig/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml    2017-03-12 22:10:29.885087000 +0900
+++ new/final-system/sparc/elftoaout.xml    2017-05-18 13:43:22.681986281 +0900
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
           <para>Converts an ELF-formatted file to Sparc a.out format for use
           with openprom</para>
           <indexterm zone=""ch-system-elftoaout elftoaout"">
-            <primary sortas=""a-elftoaout"">elftoaout</primary>
+            <primary sortas=""b-elftoaout"">elftoaout</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

#1: final-system/sparc/silo.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/sparc/silo.xml new/final-system/sparc/silo.xml
--- orig/final-system/sparc/silo.xml    2017-03-12 22:10:29.885087000 +0900
+++ new/final-system/sparc/silo.xml    2017-05-18 13:43:36.251600416 +0900
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
           <para>Silo bootloader installer. This program installs the
           first stage into the bootblock.</para>
           <indexterm zone=""ch-system-silo silo"">
-            <primary sortas=""a-silo"">silo</primary>
+            <primary sortas=""b-silo"">silo</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
           <para>Checks to see whether a file is readable
            by silo (very handy if you have larger disks).</para>
           <indexterm zone=""ch-system-silo silocheck"">
-            <primary sortas=""a-silocheck"">silocheck</primary>
+            <primary sortas=""b-silocheck"">silocheck</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
           <para>Is a file that is called by the tilo command to build
           a TFTP boot image.</para>
           <indexterm zone=""ch-system-silo maketilo"">
-            <primary sortas=""a-maketilo"">maketilo</primary>
+            <primary sortas=""b-maketilo"">maketilo</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
            embodies several kernel images for different Sun architectures and
            a ramdisk root image.</para>
           <indexterm zone=""ch-system-silo tilo"">
-            <primary sortas=""a-tilo"">tilo</primary>
+            <primary sortas=""b-tilo"">tilo</primary>
           </indexterm>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

#2: final-system/common/shadow.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/common/shadow.xml new/final-system/common/shadow.xml
--- orig/final-system/common/shadow.xml    2017-05-18 13:42:03.653069600 +0900
+++ new/final-system/common/shadow.xml    2017-05-18 13:53:11.289464787 +0900
@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@
 <screen os=""e""><userinput>./configure \
     --sysconfdir=/etc</userinput></screen>
 
-<para os=""f"">The meaning of the new configure option:</para>
-
   <variablelist os=""g"">
+    <title>The meaning of the new configure option:</title>
+
     <varlistentry>
       <term><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc</parameter></term>
       <listitem><para>Tells Shadow to install its configuration files into

#2: final-system/multilib/shadow.xml (Branch 'systemd', other branches)
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml new/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml
--- orig/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml    2017-05-18 13:42:03.837069600 +0900
+++ new/final-system/multilib/shadow.xml    2017-05-18 13:55:27.443958980 +0900
@@ -42,10 +42,6 @@
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi=""http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude""
     href=""../common/shadow.xml""
-    xpointer=""xpointer(//*[@os='f'])""/>
-
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi=""http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude""
-    href=""../common/shadow.xml""
     xpointer=""xpointer(//*[@os='g'])""/>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi=""http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude""

#3: boot/common/pwdgroup.xml (Branch 'sysvinit')
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml new/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml
--- orig/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml    2017-05-19 17:55:02.884672900 +0900
+++ new/boot/common/pwdgroup.xml    2017-05-19 17:55:50.461582103 +0900
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>messagebus:x:&gid-messagebus;:</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>User for D-Bus</para>
+        <para>Group for D-Bus</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>

#4: final-system/common/attr.xml (Branch 'systemd')
==============================================================================
diff -Naur orig/final-system/common/attr.xml new/final-system/common/attr.xml
--- orig/final-system/common/attr.xml    2017-05-19 18:15:37.763743800 +0900
+++ new/final-system/common/attr.xml    2017-05-19 18:17:15.843362151 +0900
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
     <title>Installation of Attr</title>
 
     <para os=""s1"">Apply a sed which prevents man-pages which were installed by
-    the <xref linkend=""man-pages""/> package:</para>
+    the <xref linkend=""ch-system-man-pages""/> package:</para>
 
 <screen os=""s2""><userinput>sed -i -e ""/SUBDIRS/s|man[25]||g"" man/Makefile</userinput></screen>
}}}

>Regards,
>matsu"	task	closed	major	CLFS Standard 3.1.0	BOOK	CLFS Standard GIT	fixed		berzerkula@… jonathan@… chris@… cross-lfs@…